Many young people have died. But the ones that readily cross our mind are the people who are getting killed in Nepal, the Nepalese killed in Iraq and the Nepalese students who recently got killed in accident and robbery case in USA. Of course many others have died untimely death all over the world. The common thing is they all leave a devastated and heart-broken friends and families behind. This is a very sad and slow song on this.


- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073


Please check the song on above link and give your feedback/suggestions/criticisms.

The lyrics is pasted below:

Died Young

The castles you made came crashing down, no one knows why
Towering waves showed no feelings while sweeping the ruins aside
Something else was planned for you but how were we supposed to know?
Your journey cut short for reasons unknown; we suffered the painful blow.

Your life, your plans
Were all seized
By the powers that knew how to deceive

Do you see the sad people when you gaze down from high above?
Would you have done things in a different way, had you ever known?
Maybe you’re happier, who knows, there on your heavenly abode
Perhaps it is the only consolation, or is it really so?

Shattered dreams
Lying on the ground
For the broken hearts to pick


Written, Composed and Performed by Bibek Bhatta
February 2006
© All rights reserved.

Cheers

Crappy pessimistic song

Ekdam nice song. Mahisasur, how do you manage this? Keep it up.

I found this song quite pessimistic and sad but really really nice. Count me as your loyal fan from now on :) You are also a good songwriter.

Khaobaadi, yes, though I have tried to paint a shade of optimsim in the second stanza, the song overall sounds quite pessimistic. About the song being crappy, I note the point. However, it would have helped me to improve this song if it was a constructive criticism instead of just acritism.

And Chhiring, you are kind arent you? Thanks for listening to it. Constructive critisms would be gladly accepted. I am going to change the guitar solo in this song for sure sometime later.


- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073


Pls provide your feedback

Lovely song indeed. The only suggestion I can give is keep it up.

नाम महिससुर काम त राम्रै पो गर्दो र छ छोरो ले ,,, लभ दि ट्र्याक
कीप इत उप मान

I loved the composition and lyrics but dude you need to do something to improve or perhaps change the vocal. Right now it is not justifying the lyrics and music. Anyways good try nevertheless. Appreciate your efforts.

कति राम्रो र सुरीळो गीत
मलाई पनि मन पर्ञो। कति मिठो गितार को धुन कसरि बजाको हो कुन्नि। लोन्लि जि ळे भनेको जस्तै स्बर चाहि अरू राम्रो बनाऊन सकिन्छ। तर संगित त यो भन्दा कति राम्रो हुन सक्ला र। लौ अरु पनि गाऊदै जानुसमेरो शुभकामनाछ।

HansomeKancha, I will keep it up.

Freek, glad that you liked the track. Thanks for encouragement.
I am also thinking that maybe the name Mahisasur sounds a little rough in this case. I am thinking of adopting a softer and nicer name, say for example like Bhasmaasur :) j/k

Mr Lonely, I totally agree that I have to either improve or find a suitable singer. I hope to do one of that as soon as possible. I hope I will have done that by the time I have finished 11 songs for this demo CD. Thanks for the suggestion and liking the music.

Catmancanmancandnotdo man :), kasto lamo naam! Thanks for your shuvakamana. I will definitely see what I can do with the voice.

I will make this song available to be downloaded by this evening. Please download it


- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073

Cheers

Speakin as a Producer and Singer... I would say.. GOOD WORK...
did u use yo Home studeo for this project???

umm Wel..., good to know that many nepalis are in SOUNDCLICK

check my productions too......

- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=192513

Santosh

- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=192513

Antiking, I checked your songs and I instantly liked Barshaat and Samjhiyera Hera. Was that you that was singing there? I assume so. You have got awesome vocals, I wish I had a voice like that. Obviously I could not check all 28 songs :) but those two were really cool. And one thing. I could hear proper bass and drums in both of those songs. Did you get together a band together to record those?

As for me, I use simple drums machine for the drums. Apart from that, I do all the guitars and vocals . I havent added bass, but I will. I use a software called Sound Forge to lay one track on top of another.I attach photo of all 'equipment'just for amusement :)

And thanks for stopping by.

hheheeheh
thanks bro....
umm well... i sing in beats... my friends make beats for me...
i do compose melody and words and yeah all vocals are mine...
i record at home... and i do mix them by myself.....

here is my dirty work station, my studeo and my room hehehehe

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