It is a story of a girl who is so madly and crazily in love with the best guy she can ever find. Met him some 3 years back in Ohio (for her it is the city of love). When they first met it was all about flirting, immaturity, insensible, attitude, ego and lot more negativism. It was nothing like love at first sight and magical touch. Rather it was all about having some fun at that moment. As time passed by, they started to understand each other and got closer. They started to build a strong bond between them, the bond they later named as “LOVE”. They were a happy lucky couple. Almost every time and everything they did together. Everybody around them would be jealous of them and wished  they were in such relations. But unfortunately, god was not that gladly blessed with them. The guy decided to move to the different state. It all happened all of a sudden and in a very less time. The girl was left alone with the memories. That city had lots and lots of memories both good and bad they had spent together. She started to live her life with those memories and  forgot about her own life. She was missing him so badly that she almost stop taking care of her and her studies. On the other side, the guy was in a good situation. He had new friends, new environment, he was not missing her that much. The distance between them were growing bigger and bigger and love was getting narrower. The girl was so crazy about him that she stopped her studies and her work was not going well. She was going low in her life whereas her guy was going higher and higher in his life. Eventually, the distance between them brought misunderstandings and regular fights that one day the guy decided that he no more could be with her together and breaks up with her.
    The another phase of her life begins. She started to stay alone, stopped socializing. She had no schools and she hardly had a regular job. She hardly talked with anybody on phone or met any one. She was lost in his memories, the memories that she cherished. The guy was happy in his life. He was studying hard to be in a position. He didn’t call her even once. He made a complete distance with her as he said. One day  the guy went back to his country to visit his family. It was his b’day and she knew his home number so decided to call him thinking he’d be glad and that he’d really feel happy. But he was not glad and when he picked up the phone all he said was “thank you” and banged the phone. Time passed and she really wanted to overcome this grief but she was not being able to because he was all over him no matter what she did or where she went. One day, she met a guy in msn messenger and she started talking to him. She felt he was nice and thought she should use him to forget her love. Then they  started talking everyday online and on phone. One day they met and became good friends to share their feelings. He was really helping her forget him. Then  he comes back from Nepal. He meets with her, he come to know about her study and really get upsets. He comes to know that she’s been going around with the other guy and really gets mad and asks her  to be with him again. That was the thing that she always wanted and she accepts it. With no past memories and bitter feelings towards him she goes with her for summer in ocean city. With new hope towards her life and love she starts her life again. She starts to be happy, starts to think about her life. Summer of ‘07 went so fast and so awesome for her. In a glimpse it was a beginning of another semester and the guy had to go back to his university. She again went back to Ohio. This time when she came back to Ohio she had new hopes and new aspirations for her life. She wanted to study again and did try many ways to do but couldn’t as she was already out of status for long period of  time. Both of them were going good but again the same misunderstanding and all other stuffs were taking its place in their life and one day they again got separated. This time even the girl thought it was too much. And that is it. She wanted to put full stop on her relationship. She was being called by her aunt who lives in Chicago and without thinking any further she readily accepted to go there and settle out there. She wanted to meet him but decided not to but she called him up but he was too busy with his own life that he didn’t even reply to his call. She thought life was like that no matter even if you love somebody don’t expect to get anything in return. She went to Chicago leaving all her memories and thinking to start a new life, forget the guy but she couldn’t. She stayed in Chicago for 2 weeks then couldn’t resist it. She wanted to see him and talk to him. She tried calling him and this time he finally picks up the phone but again have disputes over calling him at Friday night when he was drinking with his friends. She really gets upset. She didn’t have any body to share her feelings. So she decided she’ll go back to Ohio for couple of weeks, spend time with her only friend and then come back. She did the same thing, she went there stayed for 10 days, spent her 8 days smoking pots and drinking beers to forget him and not remember him at all but she couldn’t resist. She wanted to go see him where he was. His place was 4 hours away so she decided to go on a grey hound. She not e had all these things going on in her mind. She thought when she’ll see him , she’ll slap him, say all bitter words and not at all cru and make herself look weaker in front of him .She wanted to make herself look bold enough in front of him even without him. When she saw him first it she did as she thought. But she later on she broked down and tears rolled down her cheeks like valueless diamonds. She begged him to back with her. All he did was kissed her and calmly send her back as she had her boarding time early next morning. She went back to Chicago. She filled for an asylum just to be able to study as she leaving her study was big issue that she faced with him. She was going through terrible times with courts and lawyers and during that time he was there with her talking to her on the phone ,calming her down when anxiety touched her extremity. On her final court date, she was granted an asylum visa. As soon she was out she called him and told about it, he was very happy to hear that. Then after few weeks she joined college and started to study which she had been wanting to do since long time now. They were now moreover like friends. They used to talk like 2-3 days a week and their relation was going good. One day, while talking they get into an arguments again and the boy gets pissed off. He gets so angry that he banged the phone. That whole night the girl felt so bad and slept while crying. She was so sad. Even when she got up in the morning tears were rolling down her cheeks. She didn’t want to call him next morning thinking she should give him time to cool down and so waited for his call. He called him around 8pm but since she was busy couldn’t talk to me. Then around 8:30 she gave him a call but this time he go busy and couldn’t talk as both of them were at work. Finally, she got off her work around midnight and called him, to her surprise he was talking very nice as he used to talk to her few years back. She was afraid, afraid that he had something bad to tell her. She thought he was going away from her life forever now. He told her that he wanted to say her something  and to her surprise he said ,”I love you very very very v ery very very very much”. She cried and banged the phone she couldn’t believe that. That was what she was wanting to hear since long long time now. She calls him back again and shouts saying,” If you cant love me, don’t play a trick on me, it really hurts my emotions and please do respect my feelings and love towards you”. As soon as she completed her words he said,” hey, ive always had loved you. But it was not working between us so I didn’t wanted to say you. But this time I want to start it all over again. I want  to understand you, understand you feeling, trust you and work with you”. Hearing these words she was so happy, happy like she has never been one long time back………………………………...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................This is not the end……………………

 

An A for effort, but an F for presentation.  Was a pain going through your whole piece of work.  I just felt it just wasn't captivating at all, the grammar was really bad and most importantly, couldn't you have formatted your story a lil better so it would've been easier for us readers to go through with no probs and not be totally overwhelmed by the content that was all squished into a jar of molded cookies?? 

5 words to sum it all up as a reader: Please Spare Us The Pain!!

 

HE ,SHE, and ME all messed up.

shadow_scary, it'd be nicer if u'd cleaned ur story a lil...it's too hard to read with all those grammar thingy....btw is it real or fiction??

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Did you mean to write it this way miss Scary ???

It is a story of a girl who is so madly and crazily in love with the best guy she can ever find. Met him some 3 years back in Ohio (for her it is the city of love). When they first met it was all about flirting, immaturity, insensible, attitude, ego and lot more negativism. It was nothing like love at first sight and magical touch. Rather it was all about having some fun at that moment.

 

As time passed by, they started to understand each other and got closer. They started to build a strong bond between them, the bond they later named as “LOVE”. They were a happy lucky couple. Almost every time and everything they did together. Everybody around them would be jealous of them and wished  they were in such relations. But unfortunately, god was not that gladly blessed with them. The guy decided to move to the different state. It all happened all of a sudden and in a very less time. The girl was left alone with the memories. That city had lots and lots of memories both good and bad they had spent together. She started to live her life with those memories and  forgot about her own life. She was missing him so badly that she almost stop taking care of her and her studies.

 

On the other side, the guy was in a good situation. He had new friends, new environment, he was not missing her that much. The distance between them were growing bigger and bigger and love was getting narrower. The girl was so crazy about him that she stopped her studies and her work was not going well. She was going low in her life whereas her guy was going higher and higher in his life. Eventually, the distance between them brought misunderstandings and regular fights that one day the guy decided that he no more could be with her together and breaks up with her.
    

The another phase of her life begins. She started to stay alone, stopped socializing. She had no schools and she hardly had a regular job. She hardly talked with anybody on phone or met any one. She was lost in his memories, the memories that she cherished. The guy was happy in his life. He was studying hard to be in a position. He didn’t call her even once. He made a complete distance with her as he said. One day  the guy went back to his country to visit his family. It was his b’day and she knew his home number so decided to call him thinking he’d be glad and that he’d really feel happy. But he was not glad and when he picked up the phone all he said was “thank you” and banged the phone. Time passed and she really wanted to overcome this grief but she was not being able to because he was all over him no matter what she did or where she went.

 

One day, she met a guy and she started talking to him. She felt he was nice and thought she should use him to forget her love. Then they  started talking everyday online and on phone. One day they met and became good friends to share their feelings. He was really helping her forget him. Then  he comes back from Nepal.

 

He meets with her, he come to know about her study and really get upset. He comes to know that she’s been going around with the other guy and really gets mad and asks her  to be with him again. That was the thing that she always wanted and she accepts it. With no past memories and bitter feelings towards him she goes with her for summer in ocean city. With new hope towards her life and love she starts her life again. She starts to be happy, starts to think about her life. Summer of ‘07 went so fast and so awesome for her. In a glimpse it was a beginning of another semester and the guy had to go back to his university.

She again went back to Ohio. This time when she came back to Ohio she had new hopes and new aspirations for her life. She wanted to study again and did try many ways to do but couldn’t as she was already out of status for long period of  time. Both of them were going good but again the same misunderstanding and all other stuffs were taking its place in their life and one day they again got separated. This time even the girl thought it was too much. And that is it. She wanted to put full stop on her relationship.

 

She was being called by her aunt who lives in Chicago and without thinking any further she readily accepted to go there and settle out there. She wanted to meet him but decided not to but she called him up but he was too busy with his own life that he didn’t even reply to his call. She thought life was like that no matter even if you love somebody don’t expect to get anything in return. She went to Chicago leaving all her memories and thinking to start a new life, forget the guy but she couldn’t. She stayed in Chicago for 2 weeks then couldn’t resist it. She wanted to see him and talk to him. She tried calling him and this time he finally picks up the phone but again have disputes over calling him at Friday night when he was drinking with his friends. She really gets upset. She didn’t have any body to share her feelings. So she decided she’ll go back to Ohio for couple of weeks, spend time with her only friend and then come back.

 

 She did the same thing, she went there stayed for 10 days, spent her 8 days smoking pots and drinking beers to forget him and not remember him at all but she couldn’t resist. She wanted to go see him where he was. His place was 4 hours away so she decided to go on a grey hound. She not e had all these things going on in her mind. She thought when she’ll see him , she’ll slap him, say all bitter words and not at all cru and make herself look weaker in front of him .She wanted to make herself look bold enough in front of him even without him. When she saw him first it she did as she thought. But she later on she broked down and tears rolled down her cheeks like valueless diamonds. She begged him to back with her. All he did was kissed her and calmly send her back as she had her boarding time early next morning. She went back to Chicago. She filled for an asylum just to be able to study as she leaving her study was big issue that she faced with him. She was going through terrible times with courts and lawyers and during that time he was there with her talking to her on the phone ,calming her down when anxiety touched her extremity. On her final court date, she was granted an asylum visa.

 

 As soon she was out she called him and told about it, he was very happy to hear that. Then after few weeks she joined college and started to study which she had been wanting to do since long time now. They were now moreover like friends. They used to talk like 2-3 days a week and their relation was going good. One day, while talking they get into an arguments again and the boy gets pissed off. He gets so angry that he banged the phone. That whole night the girl felt so bad and slept while crying. She was so sad. Even when she got up in the morning tears were rolling down her cheeks. She didn’t want to call him next morning thinking she should give him time to cool down and so waited for his call. He called him around 8pm but since she was busy couldn’t talk to me. Then around 8:30 she gave him a call but this time he go busy and couldn’t talk as both of them were at work.

 

Finally, she got off her work around midnight and called him, to her surprise he was talking very nice as he used to talk to her few years back. She was afraid, afraid that he had something bad to tell her. She thought he was going away from her life forever now. He told her that he wanted to say her something  and to her surprise he said ,”I love you very very very very very very very much”. She cried and banged the phone she couldn’t believe that. That was what she was wanting to hear since long long time now. She calls him back again and shouts saying,” If you cant love me, don’t play a trick on me, it really hurts my emotions and please do respect my feelings and love towards you”. As soon as she completed her words he said,” hey, ive always had loved you. But it was not working between us so I didn’t wanted to say you. But this time I want to start it all over again. I want  to understand you, understand you feeling, trust you and work with you”. Hearing these words she was so happy, happy like she has never been one long time back.

...................................................................This is not the end……………………..............

Thank me later ;)

Is it real ? hey lausay thaks for writing again .

But SS it was a awesome one and i think it got some connection with you . I myself have some memories i cant ever take off my head . I know its really difficult but u need to let it go ..