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 Echoes of the heart
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Posted on 07-11-08 3:19 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Echoes of the heart

I had lost my faith and trust,
in this whole "love" thing.
Then, I ran into your words
and could hear my heart sing.

I assembled all my courage,
and walked right up to you.
From that day foward, I knew
what I felt for you was true.

Now you reside in my heart,
I even find you in my dreams.
You are always in my thoughts,
that keeps me away from screams.

I am putting my life in your hands;
decorate it or demolish, it’s up to you.
I look forward to the places we go,
and the things we will be put through.

I am here for you forever and always
just like I was from the very start.
Believe me when I tell you that
I love you from the bottom of my heart.

I hope we will always be together,
and things will never tear apart.
I would like to remind you again,
that I adore you with all my heart.

Last edited: 12-Jul-08 12:53 PM

 
Posted on 07-11-08 3:28 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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यि सब माया प्रेमको कुरामा
मैले मेरो आश्था र बिश्वास हराएको थिएँ
अनि म तिम्रो शब्दमा हराएँ
जहाँ म मेरो दिलको गित सुन्न सक्थेँ

मैले मेरा सबै साहसहरु संगालेँ
र तिम्रो अगाडि आएँ
त्यस दिन देखि मैले थाहा पाएँ
तिम्रो लागि मैले महशुस गर्नेकुरा सबै सत्य रहेछ

अब त तिमि मेरो मुटुमा बास गर्छौ
अझ सपनामा पनि म तिमीलाई भेट्टाउँछु
तिमी सधैँ मेरो सोचाइमा हुन्छौ
जसले मेरो चित्कारहरु बन्द गरिदिन्छन
(जसले मलाई मेरो चिच्याहट बाट पर लैजान्छन)

डट डट डट डट ...

के हो नेप्चे बुरो लोप परे जस्तो छ नि  अहम अहम्!


 
Posted on 07-11-08 3:52 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nkc bro ke ho daro daro jaadaichanta hau

 bro lop sop ma paryo jasto cha   ho bhane ho bhani hala bro natra too late hola


 
Posted on 07-11-08 5:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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हो हो --यस्तै यस्तै लेख्न पर्छ :)  भनेसी आउदोसाल बुहारी भित्र्याउने पक्का  भो हैन त नेप्चे भाइ?


 
Posted on 07-11-08 5:43 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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हो हो --यस्तै यस्तै लेख्न पर्छ :)  भनेसी आउदोसाल Bhauju  भित्र्याउने ani jail parne पक्का  भो हैन त नेप्चे bro?


 
Posted on 07-11-08 7:58 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am here for you forever and always
just like I was from the very start.
Believe me when I tell you that
I love you from the bottom of my heart.

 

Wow.....

I must say, whoever she is, she is going to be one of the luckiest girls in the world...

I think I have written this line before also....

हो हो --यस्तै यस्तै लेख्न पर्छ :)  भनेसी आउदोसाल Bhauju  भित्र्याउने पक्का  भो हैन त नेप्चे bro?

Wow... Bhauju lyauna paine bho...  Bhoj khana paine bho.. ... Kasto mazza



 
Posted on 07-11-08 8:28 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am putting my life in your hands;
decorate or demolish it, it’s up to you.
I look forward to the places we go,
and the things we will be put through.

यसैलाइ भन्छन् साँचो माया, नपत्याए NKC लाइ सोधे हुन्छ।

एक्दम मन छोयो मेरो त।


 
Posted on 07-11-08 8:47 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I had lost my faith and trust,
in this whole "love" thing.
Then, I ran into your words
and could hear my heart sing

I am putting my life in your hands;
decorate or demolish it, it’s up to you

Nice one NKC. You are driving towards romantic life


 
Posted on 07-12-08 3:31 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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जिम्माल बा, अंग्रेजी हरफलाई नेपालीमा अक्षरस उल्था गरी दिनु भएकोमा आभारी छु।

Kalejo bro, mathi ko harafaharu "daro" lageko sunda malai khusi laagyo.  Tara sajha ma post gareko harek kabita sangai lop ani tragedy parna thale mero jindagi ke hunthyo holaa kathai...   Padhera kehi sabda byakta gari dinu bhaeko maa dhanyabaada chha.

मिस दिदी अनी झिल्के ब्रो, खै कहिले हो भित्रयाउने, केही टुङो छैन...भित्रिने मान्छे पनि भेटिनु पर्‍यो नि पहिला....

Cheli sis, I don't have any dubiousness over your "she is going to be one of the luckiest girls in the world" part. She will be for sure...अर्को साल? त्यसको लागी त पहिला भित्रिने मान्छे नै भेटिनु पर्‍यो नि...

CL, मन छोको सुनेर मलाई पनि खुसी लाग्यो। माया त सधैं साचो हुन्छ, धोका दिने त मान्छेहरु ले मात्र हो। हरफ हरु पढेर केही शब्द लेखिदिनु भएकोमा आभारी छु। 

Stat, thank you very much for the encouraging note. Regarding driving towards the romance part, I would go with Oscar Wilde: "To love one's self is the beginning of a life-long romance." 

PS: Most of the stuffs I have posted here are stale creation from my closet. They don't reflect my state of mind at present. If they do by any chance, that would be purely coincidental.

I convey my appreciation to all the silent readers as well...

 

 


 
Posted on 07-12-08 3:50 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Absolutely amazing.....Full of  emotions which could possibly make any reader fall in love  with  their significant one all over again. Power of love!! and Anyone could feel that   in your words..Great!  

भनेसी आउदोसाल बुहारी भित्र्याउने पक्का  भो हैन त  भाइ?

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double post

Last edited: 12-Jul-08 03:50 PM

 
Posted on 07-12-08 3:59 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ल दामी कविता गएछ नेप्चे भाईको! हैन कसरी फुर्छ हौ यस्तो यस्तो कविता? भनेसी आउदोसाल बुहारी भित्र्याउने पक्का भो हैन त नेप्चे भाइ? किप इट अप!

Very nice! :-)

---any reader fall in love with their significant one all over again--- Ahem Ahem! ;-) :P nice nice!

Last edited: 12-Jul-08 04:01 PM

 
Posted on 07-12-08 4:57 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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NKC,

Enjoy your stay on Cloud No. Nine :)


 
Posted on 07-12-08 8:49 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am putting my life in your hands;
decorate it or demolish, it’s up to you.
lovely!   : )   


 
Posted on 07-13-08 12:13 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Spring sis, your instigating remark certainly gives an inspiration to come up with more stanzas like these in coming days. Thanks a ton..

Camo bro, हजुरका ति मिठा, प्रेरणादायी शब्द हरु को लागी मुरी मुरी धन्यवाद।

BB bro, I would have enjoyed my stay, had someone brought me there yet...Your inspiring note is highly appreciated. :)

Prerana, I am glad that you found those stanzas lovely. Thank you for the support...

 

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Posted on 07-13-08 12:25 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice  poem !!

If you keep  on writing like this  you will get your Nepal Ki Chori for sure and she is more lucky to have you who is more creative and expressive . :P

 

keep the good work on !!

Kali

 


 
Posted on 07-13-08 2:03 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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"I am here for you forever and always
just like I was from the very start.
Believe me when I tell you that
I love you from the bottom of my heart"...........WOW  

ramro chha nepchu yo pani !!!

 


 
Posted on 07-13-08 5:38 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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"I am here for you forever and always
just like I was from the very start.
Believe me when I tell you that
I love you from the bottom of my heart" Wah!!

Brother, I am saying again my bhauju will be one of the luckiest girl in the world.

Keep it up.

 

 


 
Posted on 07-13-08 11:57 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Kali, your good wishes are treasured..thank you very much for actuating script.

Dipu,  glad to hear that you liked this piece too. Thanks a ton for those propelling tidings. 

Cheli sis, without any incertitude, she would be ...


 
Posted on 07-14-08 8:24 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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3 choti padhisake, ajhai padhna man lagchha bhanya k bhako?


 


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