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 ARE YOU SINGLE??! - outrageous!
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Posted on 03-05-06 5:39 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I was basking in the sun yesterday afternoon and this beautiful girl was walking down the street outside where I live. It would be a huge injustice not to write a song about her: she looked that gorgeous!


This is my first merry and happy song. This is also a soft rock song, unlike any of my earlier songs. I have crafted a very simple but interesting rhythm in this song and hope that any people aged between 8 to 80 can sway to the music. The chorus of this song is more outrageous than funny :) Please provide yr vluable comments/ suggestions.


- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073


Are you single?

Head held high you grace the street,
Your long hair blowing in the wind
All eyes fixed; traffic stands still
You’re a gem no one never seen

Captivated and transfixed,
By unknown depths of your eyes
Attracting the envy of Venus
And angels from the skies

Would you want someone to talk to?
Would you want someone who’d listen?
Say yes though you may not want to
You never know what you are missing.

Clouds have given way to blue sky
The sun is smiling down on you
A perfect blend it seems but how
Incomplete without you

May be sit down for a few drinks?
Or is it something that you hate?
If you are running late for something
Let me ask one thing straight

Are you single? Are you looking?
Would you say yes though you may not be?
Would you want someone to talk to?
Would you say yes though you may not want to?


Written, Composed and Performed by Bibek Bhatta
04 March 2006
© All rights reserved.
 
Posted on 03-05-06 6:34 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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i m listening to ur piece of music.... nice work... guitar was cool.. and nice way to praise the gal and put it in lyrics but does she even know if this song is dedicated to her.... hehe just a thought... anyways,,,, keep up the good work.. take care and continue the great job..
 
Posted on 03-05-06 9:24 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Yo mahisasur,
That was superb art. The lyrics and muzik was awesome, mindblowing blah blah. But you gotta improve on vocals. Try singing in the morning everyday. I was really suprised how you compile muzik and lyrics together and sing the song. Hey just got a question, i am working on my rap song but i need to know how can i compile the muzik and record the song like you did?
Help me out brah.
Virus Mc
 
Posted on 03-05-06 3:17 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nepali nari, thanks for listening and liking the music. To answer the question, no the gal in question does not know that I have written a song about her. Perhaps it will remain unknows to her forever as I do not know the girl personally. I just saw her passing by when it was sunny the other day.

Marshal67 brother, thanks for showering all the nice words for my music. Yes, I am working to improve my voice and all the vocals will be altered at some point before I produce the demo CD. To answer your question, I am not sure whether you are asking about the technical recording or musical recording. If it is technical, I first record Drums, then Rhythm, then Guitar Solo an then record the Vocals. I listen to the drums thru one headfone and then sing/ play guitar so that everything is spot on. Then I use the software called Sound Forge to mix all the tracks on top of each other.
If the question is related to music, I normally follow two options. Sometimes I first create a guitar rhythm and then hear it thru headfone and sing and record the song in scale (like I have done in Are U single). Or I may also first sing a song and create a music so as to fit the song(like I have done in Long ago...). Either way works good for me. Anything that sounds good to ear is music though knoledge of musical scales help. Even while recording rap, sing and create a baseline or background music to fit the way you sing. I hope I have answered yr question.

- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073

Please listen to the song thru above link. Meanwhile in this song, I have just crafted another guitar solo that floats over the rhythm. So there are two guitar solos :) It is mental . Please check it. Cheers!
 
Posted on 03-05-06 3:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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* create a baseline = create a bassline
 
Posted on 03-05-06 8:04 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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work of a genius. I am listening to it again.
 
Posted on 03-05-06 8:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Exactly. I am also surprised how he brings new songs. Any world famous band would be proud to have a song like this in their album. Another superb job, mahisasur, keep it up. Also be honest about the girl :p
 
Posted on 03-06-06 5:57 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Handsome dude , save those nice words for better songs that I may come up with later :) thanks for listening. Chiring, thanks for encouraging words. about getting honest, let me copy and paste from my own posting above

was basking in the sun yesterday afternoon and this beautiful girl was walking down the street outside where I live. It would be a huge injustice not to write a song about her: she looked that gorgeous!

That is as honest as I can get :)

For those who havent listened to this song, please do so


- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=411073


Cheers
 


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