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spritual
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Posted on 01-31-13 4:44
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There was a beautiful girl living next to my house about 150 Meter away. I always wanted to go close to her and introduce myself, but couldn't gather that much courage. She used to go college passing my house. I always waited to see her face hiding behind the wall of my house. It was like my daily routine. She was unaware of my activities.
Whenever I see her my day was made, I would be happiest guy in the world. Her innocent face with big eyes and white complexion had made me crazy. I don't know what was that: love, attraction, sexual attraction, crush whatever was that. It used to bring tremendous happiness within me.
My days was going like this suddenly one day I had an eye contact with her while she was passing by my home. I felt like she gave light smile, no wonder my limit of happiness. This gave me little more courage to go in front of her and confess whatever feeling I had towards her..................to be continued
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Run Dmc
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Posted on 02-07-13 3:02
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Dude, I like the way you potray your essence of innocence in love. In all honesty, I can relate to bits and pieces of your story. I know you are writing from your heart but please use some kind of spell checker and tighten up on trifles.
Trifles make perfection, and perfection is no trifles.
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Posted on 02-07-13 3:50
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@run dmc
"I know you are writing from you heart".
Dude I think you need to do the same.
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Posted on 02-07-13 4:20
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Preety good story bro,
Grate afford.
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Run Dmc
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Posted on 02-07-13 4:26
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@Bourneidentity: I corrected it.
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freedom2012.
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Posted on 02-07-13 6:55
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That must be weird living 150 meters apart and meeting online. Anyways, is she prettier than Jessica Alba bro?.
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Posted on 02-08-13 1:08
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I am not great in reading and writing but surely this story has some 'thing' in it. I can smell honesty, naiveness, and an expression of true feeling.
Annehathway does seem to be fascinated with this magnificient piece from Spiritual. I wonder why, anne is going deep analyzing each phrases and somehow trying to relate it to her own life(just a guess). It seems the story (as it should turn) might have reminded her of her own past experiences( which she might be in a position of self-denial). And as her comment goes she wishes the story to go according to her way, a way she prefers, a way that would make her feel comfortable.
Anyways, lot of analysis from my point.
kepp your spirits high and go on with your story.
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Posted on 02-08-13 9:42
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There you go. I deleted my comment.
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Posted on 02-08-13 11:28
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How'd you manage to delete your comment, Anne?
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freedom2012.
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Posted on 02-08-13 5:31
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She edited it. But not before Dr Phil had printed a copy of it.
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spritual
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Posted on 02-11-13 2:09
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Next day, I took a bike and headed to cyber cafe. I didn't have internet connection at my home. So I had to go to cyber and pay huge sum of Rs. 30 per hour.But she had internet at home. When I signed up my MSN messenger, time was 5:15 p.m. she was already there. I was so happy to see her online. I immediately typed
Me: Hi, Ayushma
Ayushma: kina dhila
Me: sorry, auda audai dhila bhayo
Ayushma: ani k chha?
Me: thik chha, timro?
Ayushma: mero ni sabai thik chha
So, we started chatting randomly about anything that pop-ups in our mind with lots of emotion signs like these .
With little bit flirtyness from my side. Like I used to say I missed you, and I used to get this ( )sign. I don't know what does that mean but I used to be happy. I wanted to send this sign but couldn't accumulate courage to send it. I decided better to wait for it.
In this way, we started to chat almost everyday at the sametime. We used to give a time, if we were coming late or early. So, it had become like my daily routine to go to cyber, after I reach home and had some khaja. I always used to get excited to go to cyber and spend 30,40 rupees everyday, sometimes even 60 rupees. I used to be very happy after chatting with Ayushma, so was cyber ko sahuji receiving by everyday business. He used to always greet me with smily face "k chha bhai ?".
We preferred more chatting online than talking in the phone. Talking in the phone wasn't very private and both of us didn't feel that comfortable. On the top of that talking in the phone is naturally awkward. So, we chose online. Sometimes we used to video chat . But since internet speed wasn't good at that time. We didn't video chat very often.
My days were passing so blissfully. There wasn't a moment when I didn't think of her. I always used to print her face in my mind and be happy. It's been about 2 months, our activity went like this. Mostly online, sometime phone, sometime, sometime rooftop. But the time has come to slow down our activity little down because our 12th grade final was approaching soon. And both of us knew 12th grade science is not a joke. So we decided not to meet often and concentrate more on study. We both agreed happily.....
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Posted on 02-11-13 2:50
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lol ----> looks like a man drowning..anyway keep 'em coming
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freedom2012.
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Posted on 02-11-13 6:10
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Mah chai thyakka opposite. Keti ko phone number mangney chai courage theyna, love symbols ta aakha cheem gareyra send garthyen.
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Posted on 02-11-13 6:18
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Why's everyone ganging up on this fellow? I'm totally digging the flow of his story. This is has a script of a superhit movie, I'm telling you!
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freedom2012.
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Posted on 02-12-13 10:42
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Spiritual bro ....fheri gayab?
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spritual
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Posted on 02-13-13 4:27
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I am little busy these days
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freedom2012.
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Posted on 02-13-13 6:01
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ok saathi....12th grade science exam ko lagi pardai hola haina :)
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spritual
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Posted on 02-13-13 6:16
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seems like you didn't read it carefully
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Posted on 02-13-13 6:33
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How can you do this? I'm having withdrawals. Can't you write at least 1-2 paragraphs please? I need my daily fix.
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Posted on 02-13-13 6:38
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hehe spiritual, yeah i read it. I was just kidding. I know your story is set in 2001.
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spritual
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Posted on 02-14-13 11:31
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We were done with our finals. We were quite happy with the way our final turned out. Now what next?. She was sure, she would be going to usa for further study. As for me I wanted to complete my bachelor in Nepal. Again our same old schedule started like it used to be.
She started toefl class. I was little sad and worried when I knew that. I haven't kept my feelings towards her yet. I was worried, if she's gonna leave me without me being able to put my feelings infront of her. I wanted to let her know, how much I love her, how much I care her, what does she mean to me. I wanted to give her unconditional love. I was burning internally.
I was also scared about the fact what if she doesn't have the same kind of feelings I have towards her. The fact of losing her used to make me so nervous. But I knew that whatever the result is I have to confess that I love her tremendously. So, oneday I decided that I am going to propose her and called her at our regular time 9:30 p.m.
Ayushma: Hello
Me: Hi Aushma
Ayushma: K chha?
Me:thik chha, euta ekdam important kura garnu chha
Ayushma: k ho testo important? bhana na
Me: promise gara, you won't get mad
Ayushma: Ok baba, I don't get mad
Me: sachi bhanu
Ayushma: bhana chhitto
Me: Ayushma I Love You very much..................to be continued
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