Needs editing. Will post after re-editing. Thanks.

sum off: very good! Is this fiction? Sounds so real.

Awesome story...is it based on real story or fiction?????

jantar jasto lagyo yo katha malai ta---- biswasko kura ho--.

sum_off,
lol.. i was the last thing re bho aaba )O: me turned into .. some stone now.. )O:

yeah, truly awesome narration. waiting for more sum off. and bro, how's the wedding? honeymoon kahan manako? im sure ure having an awesome married life. Has your wife read your posts yet about her and the rest of her family?..lolololol.

And I'm desperately waiting for the rest of the story.
TT

sum off,

an amazing narration, the first part reminded me of 'Pride and prejudice' and 'A suitable boy', absolutely amazing. Wish Vikram Seth took some lessons about brevity from you.
Waiting for more....

Sum off,
What an unique narrator you are! Appealing and very vivid presentation which i am completely engrossed in.
Please do keep writing, as Sajha needs more of wonderfully distinctive voice like yours that captures heart and mind of a reader like me.

"The first party would confine every minute discontent to her mother, and the second party usually diluted it with a neat shot of 80% proof Russian Vodka. The rest of the world only saw what they displayed in public, a gracefully compromised affection."- very well written indeed!

Nicely naratted! Been an ardent fan of yours. Please do continue writing.

Thanks for a nice read. :)

narrated I meant. Typos been epidemic for me these days!