poor child in the rain...
poor child in the rain...

we r free to go...
free to climb the world...
love and war again....
hatred and insane...
heads are cwarling on...

death is yet to come...
fear not to face...
face it with full heart...
wat is there to lose...

poor man in the rain...
poor man in the rain...

who is it to blame...
u r all insane...
why run after fame...

get ur heads all up...
what is there to fear...
swallow it with wine...
drink till you r mine...

kill yourself with words....
add a lil rum...
words r all you got...
eat n drink with it...
chew it till u can...

violence in my hand....
kiss me with sweet death...
life is yet to go...
long long way to go..

poor man still in rain...
poor child still in rain...

hus hus nirman !! heres another one... it isnt a wonderful , well written stuff.... anways...

GROUNDED? (12-12-2004)

swing swing swing...
high up in the air..
thought i almost touched the sky..
sad but true...
i fell behind...

my hands were numb...
my feet started to burn..
with pain so intense...
thought it was too late to grab that last breath...

opened my eyes...
only to discover my fate...
entangled in the maze....
always doomed to be misled...

stood on my feet...
with the last bit of energy left...
but only to fall back again....
Surely ! I fell back again !!

good one...but little bit pessimistic like mine...
i have gone one step further...this is also on my profile...hope u all will enjoy it..

THE STATE OF CONFUSION....

hell passes over me,
but still i m alive,
i ought to be someone,
but results in noone....
the world seems so numb,
& the things r so dumb,
i m just too much of confused,
i m right or too much of wrong...
i ought to take control of things,
but things gets control of me...
m i in path with destination,
or the destination is passing over by me...
is this the life????...
if it is then....
i wish it ends up soon.......

cool nirman..... keep writing.... ppl keep this thread alive... post ur stuff.. so that we can go thru new things....

i don't know if i ll be bale to post again in next 1 month becoz i ll be going to field i.e. bhojpur for about next month where there is not even electricity phone ra internet ta paraa jaaos...But if u keep this thread alive ..i ll really be happy to see the real good poems...hey machul help guys and gals to keep this thread alive hai.... i ll be real happy to see the real good poems when i come back...hope to see ya later....

hey nirman... have a nice trip to bhojpur...wish i was back home..... gosainkunda jaana maan cha... yea nir.. do encourage others to write as well ni....

All Alone

When frens turn to foes?
When saints turn to sinners?
When love turns to hatred?
When smiles turn to tears?
When day turns to night?
When peace turns to violence?
Where will u be?
Tell me.. where will you be?

Believe me we r all alone?
Yes we are all alone?

omit ?..........

Good one Machul...here is one from my side..and yeah u r just right....

"Lost In Between"
You just ask for end
when u r in pain..
There is not any more to loose,
U have lost all u have gained.
U just ask for a sunny day,
but all u gain is rain...
Mesmerized in these thoughts,
i m writing u this letter.
Even if the life goes on Its good,
& if end comes along its better...

Think this thread is read by us two only...:-)...anyways machul...keep posting...at least there are us two...Keep rocking man..

hey machul...lost or something...post some new yaar...i m waitin for it...

hey nirman..i appreciate ur encouraging words.....well am on vacation myself.... havent been writing at all lately... will surely. post some if i do come up with sth... why dont u post ur stuff.... would luv to go thru them.... its amazing that u still remembered this thread...

Here is new one though but not to my expectations...
its titled
"Life Line"

All u thought as stream of your life,
merge into mere line one day.
A line with illusive images,
A line with strange distant voices,
that hunts you and feels u as a culprit.
Hunting you with its furious eyes and fierce claws.
you run and tun and run to find,
find the lost meaning of life, and fail once again,
coz you are already traumatized in between the lines,
the line so called life...

Crap...just dragging

Miss Jhyam_putali .....

fine crap .. so it be... how about u stand as a role model n show ur not-so-crap PIECE !!!

we r alll waiting with eyes WIDE shut !!!

Sicko !

Ma_Chul,
If Nirman and you have to share poems with each other, why don't you just email each other? LOL..why bore all the other people at sajha?

hey jhyam bhai or maybe dai...whatever i don't care...well if its crap then let it be...but this sajha is not ur bau ko birta to say "Ma_Chul,
If Nirman and you have to share poems with each other, why don't you just email each other? LOL..why bore all the other people at sajha? "
if u don't like this post then don't visit this again...and morever don't read the things....
u enjoy ur things we ll enjoy ours...
Mind ur own business...and don't act as if Sajha is ur own private property

well....ramro cha hajur haru le lekhnu bhayeko poem ....keep it up...
i will be audience afterall there should be audience also..
may i??
just confined myself to u
not having any choices
shared my feelings to u
not knowing its consequences
am i wrong in believiing u???

Whats up Ruina

hmmm up??sky no no..... ryt now i am inside my room so ceiling .....
what type of question is that....
hehe hii chico whats up?

jhyam putali..... each word of urs shows how pathetic u could get...... we were just asking some real piece from u... real not-so-boring stuff from u.... why r u backing off.... besides nirman n myself, there r others who value the idea of writing and sharing it with others.... if thats bores u we never pulled u dragged u or pushed u to post in this thread....there r zillion of stars in the sky.. why did u pick the one we chose !!!!

ruina.. am a novice myself.. but like ur work.... keep writing n posting... also do encourage others to drop by n share their articles with us////....