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Nice read!! Hope to read continuation soon!! :D

can't believe that after all these years of me being away from KTM, we still have the stereo-typical Thamel manange guy...Anyway, keep going. Though I hate the "to be continued" line (reminiding me of a ZEE/SONY TV serial), I've decided to wait for the next installation...thanks in part for me being from Thamel which has helped garner a positive reaction to your story. Nice work so far and don't make me wait too long, aight??

funky buddha, 1905? hmmm....

where else?
Jbar? Liquid lounge? the black pearl (yak &yeti)?
if any of these was your frequent hang out place then i bet we must have bumped into each other :D

good going...btw, i too used to ride escorts not a long while back. does it ring a bell? :P

i hope it's "purely" fiction. else, you should check your email :D :P

LooTe

Loote, I don't think she's referring to the Yamaha Escort bike here ("her silent & invisible escort in the darkness of night"). lol

hahahahaa.......blame my adrenaline rush samsara...but she's referring to 'some' bike nonetheless :D....or is it that i need to reread the story? :S...okay am gonna do that ;P

hahah...happens to the best of us. Aight, leaving work for the day. Will post more tomorrow. Laterzzzzz

huh? will post more tomorrow re???? what you mean??? samsara==amber ? :S

Loote Dawg! that was a good catch!

Lesson # 1: Never ever use more than one name while making postings on the same thread.

LOL! ;D

Thanks Samsara and lootekukur.Samsara, I will try to come up with other part of the story very soon.
Escort as to escort, not any brand or model of motorbike. Here escort is Karma.Karma escorted Dhriti to her home without her knowledge.You got it rite Samsara.

good job...keep it coming ...will you ?

I like it. good job !

Amber,

Your delineation of characters was one of the highlights of this story, how well did you vividly depict Dhriti and Karma, and how efficiently did you compare the differences between them.Poles apart, but equally impressive, that is what I understood irrespective of the nature of characters. Finding a little solace in the insanity of Thamel's evening is what an ambiguous wannabe does, I just seemed to fit inside their skins.

Excellent read.

A marvel. Enjoyed it!

hahaha mR. hydE, i could be wrong though....even if i am not, should we care? :D

amber,
nile nile amber par chaand jab aaye, pyar barsaaye humko tarsaaye....hahahaha..i think i know you...that's why the song :P :D (but i could be wrong in which case that song is for free :D)...i am EAGERLY waiting for this story to unfold, no kidding :-)

Oh ho...the characters sound khaaatra. Nice quiet demure girl with bad boy Karma..hehe! Keep em rolling :D

amber.. for a while I was back in Ktm ..in the thronging night crowd of Thamel. I love thamel at night. :) Good going gal. Keep it coming.

I'm back at work...Hey loote and Dr. Jekyll, for me, post more = I will give more feedback on this thread tomorrow.

"It is a capital mistake to theorize before one has data. Insensibly one begins to twist facts to suit theories, instead of theories to suit facts.
:Sir Arthur Conan Doyle

Interesting read, where is the next part?

yeah amber..where is the next part? I'd hate for the suspense to die out waiting too long for the continuation.
Btw, are you from Thamel too??

sniff sniff!!!

is sth coming up today???? ki "taap" ho? bekarma chinchhu ki bhanera bhanechhu :(