आन्दोलन

वाह्! वाह्!

समसामयिक बिषयमा स्पष्ट संग  मन को कुरा लेख्नु भयो। बधाई छ।
 
 

वाह्! वाह्!

गजब राम्रो छ चेली !

Nice one.
These politicians should be shot dead.

ठूल्दाइ, लहरे, भउते दाइ, MN धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद, शब्द सुमनहरुको लागि!

MN, नेताहरु पनि हाम्रै कारणबाट यस्ता भए होलान् जस्तो लाग्छ मलाई त! बुद्धको देशका सन्तानले मर्ने मार्ने कुरा चाहिं नगरेकै राम्रो होला कि ?? 

वाह्! वाह्!  गजब राम्रो छ! अरु पनि लेख्दै गर।  

मेरो बहस चाही “संक्रमण” ले कम्तिमा benefit of doubt पाउनुपर्छ, तब मात्र यो निष्पक्ष verdict हुनेछ भन्ने हुनेछ । त्यो कुरा बाहेक, गजबको गीत प्रस्तुत गर्नुभयो चेलीज्यू । सारै मन पर्‍यो । मेरो त जिब्रैमा झुण्डेला जस्तो छ,

 

“सपनीमा पनि सँधै आन्दोलन देख्छु अचेल”

 

वाह !

 

Nepe

नेप्छे दाजु अनि नेपे दाई धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद!! हजुरहरुका यिनै शब्दहरुले हौसला दिन्छन् मलाई अझ अरुपनि लेख्न !

 

वाह् ! मात्र हो कि बाह ! पनि ?
मेरो हिसाब मा

बिषयवस्तु - बाह!
काब्य शैली - वाह्!

मैले त गजलको फर्म्याटमा ढाली दिया छु ० मीठो लागेर

 

सपनीमा पनि सँधै आन्दोलन देख्छु अचेल
जब केही लेख्न खोज्छु अशान्ति नै लेख्छु अचेल

आतंक र दुश्मनी नै छाएको छ जताततै
शान्ती माग्दै आरतीले आफ्ना आँखा सेक्छु अचेल-  बाह वाह !!

युवाहरुमाथि फेरि जाल नौलो हालेका छन्
म त पासो पर्दिन नि, विचार गरी टेक्छु अचेल

आगो बाली निर्दोषलाई आगा भित्र हालेकाछन्
त्यसैले बाटो हिंड्दा ढुङ्गा, ईंटा, लाठाहरु छेक्छु अचेल

 

यस्मा अलि मिहेनत गरे गजब होला -

 

(विकास गर्छु भन्नेले नै विकास भाँच्न थालेका छन्
तर जब लेख्न खोज्छु, अशान्ति नै लेख्छु अचेल)

(सत्तालोलुप नेताहरुले अब जातै फालेका छन्

त्यसैले त लेख्न खोज्दा अशान्ति नै लेख्छु अचेल)

 

that was really good. I don't believe you should follow politically correctess when expressing your inner feeling in writing. May the "hose" be with you ;-)

>I don't believe you should follow politically correctess

>when expressing your inner feeling in writing.

 

Well depends.

 

Depends on the expectation or lack thereof of the speaker.

 

If the speaker expects it to stand the test of time, it better be rigorous. If it is regardless, anything shall do.

 

I have seen (including my own) thousands of momentarily brilliant looking pieces lose the brilliance and die in a short span of time.

 

When something is so good, a little bit of hard work to make it better and enduring is not a bad idea. मेरो आसय त्यत्ति हो, हजुर ।

 

Nepe

धेरै राम्रो समसमयीक कबिता/गजल रहेछ।
लेख्दै गर्नुस् चेली जि।

चेली ज्यु ,
समसायिक बिषयमा कलम कुदाउनु भएछ ,राम्रो छ
अझ सजाउने कोशीस गर्नु होला ।

Thanks to all.

Daami cha.. Gives a raw and brutal insight into the emotions of a person caught in the chaotic situation that our Nepal currently lingers in. Politics in Nepal is being done just for politics, not for the development or progress of the country. Like they say "Junai jogi pani kaanai chirayko", unfortunately it holds true for most of our netas. Until they start to think about the country, the innocent citizens will have to suffer helplessly.

Thanks Chimgalogi magarji  for reading and posting your view. I absolutely agree your point "Politics in Nepal is being done just for politics, not for the development or progress of the country." And, most of the times I find ourelves (Nepalese) very helpless in these regards.   We are not being able to do something against such entities of our country.

It is true Cheli ji.. Everytime I read Nepal news, I hear the government raising the prices of goods which are basic necessities. The general public always bear the full brunt of any rise in the country's inflation when it is the government's job to devise ways to prevent them in the first place. Petroleum prices for one could be stabilized if the greedy government  could get their fat hands off the monopoly they have over this sector. Privatizing could bring about competition in terms of pricing and benefit the general public in the long run. But that would disrupt their short term goal of milking the money cow through their notorious corrupt practices. At the end of the day, the netas dont have the interest of general public in view. They are just there to savage the system and maximize their personal coffers till the next set of like minded politicians  get  elected  and do the same in their  appointed term.